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The version of her life

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2017 11:17 pm
by maria11mona
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I have all the rights for my story not to be copied.Please do not copy any of it,otherwise I will close your story.Also the cover of it was designed by me,so please do not copy it.

Prologue
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It was morning.She stood up and checked her phone.7:28 am.She knew she had 22 more minutes of sleep so she went back to her dream.
7:29 am.A message.She picked her phone and read the mesage.It was very unclear to her eyes as she was forced to wake up.
„Meet up in the library today?
Lara.”
She was going to answer back,but she thought she wouldn`t do it.So instead she went back to sleep.
BING BONG!
The alarm went on.It was time to wake up.She had a strange dream...She`s been dreaming of herself,in a enormous sea,and she found out that...
„Answering today?
Lara.”
She`s annoying.That`s what she thought.
„Helloooooo!On reception?Wake up,it`s 8!
Lara.”
She was forced to wake up so that`s what she did.

Re: The version of her life

PostPosted: Mon Mar 13, 2017 3:56 pm
by BonitaTerreza
Wow, next. :thumbup:

Re: The version of her life

PostPosted: Fri Apr 21, 2017 3:39 pm
by maria11mona
Who knew it would be bad weather today?Not me.Why is it so annoying?
„Are you at school?Meet up in the class?Wanna sit at the back?Text me quick.
Lara.”
Why does she want to sit at the back?Why not at the front?Ah yes.Because it`s Geography.Miss Mowling is the worst teacher,so that`s why she wants to sit at the back.
„Yeah,fine.Miss Mowling is with us today.Geography.
Lauren.”

When we went into class,rain was pouring inside;Miss Mowling stood up and told everybody,”Calm down!It is just some water.So,who can tell me what we did yesterday?”
Then,suddenly,all the lights went down and Miss Mowling fainted.She fainted on her back,where we saw a little door on her back.We opened it,and in it where lots of cables.
„How dare her!She`s a robot!”
„Wow,nice”

Then,the headmaster came inside.He was a robot too.Then,we realised we were trapped inside The National School Of Geography-a prison.

Re: The version of her life

PostPosted: Fri Apr 21, 2017 6:31 pm
by LuLu27
BonitaTerreza wrote:Wow, next. :thumbup:

Re: The version of her life

PostPosted: Thu May 04, 2017 4:09 pm
by anais3
Next, good story. <33 :P

Re: The version of her life

PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2017 7:16 pm
by MariaMarry
It's a beautiful story.
But is the name Lauren or Lara? Lara is the name of her friend? I don't understand because I am not using translate. :lol:

Re: The version of her life

PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2017 8:59 pm
by Cristina_stefi
The story is so beautiful ❤
But is hard to read because is in english :lol:

Re: The version of her life

PostPosted: Wed Jun 14, 2017 11:13 am
by linnzy
Cristina_stefi wrote:The story is so beautiful ❤
But is hard to read because is in english :lol:

Re: The version of her life

PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2017 9:02 am
by claireh
woow
this story is so good
congratulations and next!! :thumbup: :clap:

Re: The version of her life

PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2017 11:01 am
by madalina1234
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